Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Daddy's Girl, visible, stage

She stood in the middle of the stage
Touching the edge of her tutu
Visible tremor in her lower lip
Looking for her Daddy

She stopped at the sign
Touching the brake pedal
Visible panic in her eyes
Looking at her Daddy

She walked across the stage
Touching her new diploma
Visible sign of relief on her face
Looking for her future

She danced with her new husband
Touching her Daddy's heart
Visible tear in his eye
Looking at his girl

She smiled from the hospital bed
Touching the tiny fingers
Visible smile shared with her Daddy
Looking at herself


TC said...

I think this touches anyone who has been a Daddy's girl before. Nicely done.

Lucy said...

this is your first poem? WOW! it was so beautiful, keep on writing! I just loved the journey through her life.. :))

Becca said...

This is so touching and poignant...lovely :)

Tammy said...

I enjoyed the sweet flow of love found here. First of many I'm sure!

gautami tripathy said...

Welcome to the world of poeming. You did good!

green-eyed monster

tumblewords said...

Oh, this is so lovely! Lovely!

WriterKat said...

Well done!

Greyscale Territory said...

Loved how you reworked the dimension of "looking".

A great write!


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