http://threewordwednesday.wordpress.com/touching, visible, stage
She stood in the middle of the stage
Touching the edge of her tutu
Visible tremor in her lower lip
Looking for her Daddy
She stopped at the sign
Touching the brake pedal
Visible panic in her eyes
Looking at her Daddy
She walked across the stage
Touching her new diploma
Visible sign of relief on her face
Looking for her future
She danced with her new husband
Touching her Daddy's heart
Visible tear in his eye
Looking at his girl
She smiled from the hospital bed
Touching the tiny fingers
Visible smile shared with her Daddy
Looking at herself
7 comments:
I think this touches anyone who has been a Daddy's girl before. Nicely done.
this is your first poem? WOW! it was so beautiful, keep on writing! I just loved the journey through her life.. :))
This is so touching and poignant...lovely :)
I enjoyed the sweet flow of love found here. First of many I'm sure!
Welcome to the world of poeming. You did good!
green-eyed monster
Oh, this is so lovely! Lovely!
Loved how you reworked the dimension of "looking".
A great write!
Gemma
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